Rough Draft (1998) - full transcript

A struggling freelance writer, while investigating the transvestite night life, stumbles across a serial killer in action. The two then strike up a bizarre partnership to document the killer's motives and handiwork as a possessed detective struggling with his own personal demons tries to solve the crimes.

-Someone's sitting there.

-You're very observant.

-Where have you been?

-Out and about.

-What's her name?

-Oh, Erica.

You know there's only you.

-You're funny.

I saw you walking
with a woman outside.

You have very good
taste in women, Stefan.

-Well, that is a
complement to us both.



-Thank you.

-Ugh.

-Nice dress.

-Thank you.

-You're new here.

-It's the first
time I've been here.

-Do you mind?

I'm dying.

-There you go.

-You know Stefan?

-I just met him.

-You should be flattered.

He rarely talks to anyone.

-Oh.



Are those implants?

-Please.

I'm having the
operation next month.

-Oh.

-Tissue?

-It was either that
or grapefruits.

-You are new.

-Yes.

-Um, would you?

-There you go.

-Ah.

You have a little smudge there.

-It's tough being a woman.

-It's murder.

-You guys get me out of
bed this time of night,

it better be one of mine.

-See for yourself.

Mind you, don't
stand in the blood.

Young, cute, and unzipped
like an overnight bag.

-[laugh]

-And what the fuck is so funny?

-Sure looks like one of his.

-Well, the papers will
give him one by morning.

Did you find anything yet?

Get me a cup of coffee.

Get all these
spectators out of here.

Get them back-- way back.

-Fuck.

-We're going to start back
there and work our way up.

-All right.

-Inch by inch.

-OK.

-What's with him?

-That's what I'm
trying to figure out.

See you later, Joe.

-OK.

-Hello Mrs. Morris.

-Hello Mr. Keece.

-Would you like
to see my tattoo?

-I've already seen it.

-Oh, yeah.

[laugh] OK.

Goodnight.

-Night.

MALE SPEAKER (ON
TAPE): That's my man.

MALE SPEAKER (ON TAPE): Oh, no.
MALE SPEAKER (ON TAPE): Yes.

Why?

What did you think?

MALE SPEAKER (ON TAPE):
I am so depressed.

MALE SPEAKER (ON TAPE): Why?

-Because I want you, darling.

-Jamie, you never had a--

-Hi.

-Hi.

How did it go?

-Good.

Take a look.

-Hmm.

MALE SPEAKER (ON TAPE): Well
I don't need you anymore.

MALE SPEAKER (ON TAPE): Why?
What did I ever do to you?

MALE SPEAKER (ON TAPE):
Well you wouldn't

sit in the jacuzzi with me.

You were--

-Hey.

Um, come to bed.

-No.

-I don't want you yawning
tomorrow at the picnic.

-Picnic?

OK.

Let me save this.

-OK.

-I'll be right there.

Good.

Good.

(FEMALE VOICE) Would you
like for me to strip for you?

This was easier getting on.

-It's nice.

I don't recognize any of it.

-You didn't have the
style I was looking for.

-Oh.

Well, nor the size, I hope.

So who's your outfitter?

-Armani.

-Ah.

You're not cheap.

[laugh]

-The Salvation Armani.

The stockings are yours.

I put a hole in mine.

Ahh.

-Let me get that.

-Oh.

Is this turning you on?

-[laugh]

-Huh?

Is it turning you on?

-Only the stockings are mine?

-Oh.

I used a dab of your perfume.

-Mhm.

Do you know how
expensive that is?

-No.

Mmm.

-You really only
need a little bit.

Right-- right there.

-Oh.

-Definitely here.

-Oh.

-Here.

-Oh.

-And here.

-Yeah, definitely there.

[laugh]

Good morning.

OK.

Wake up, sleepy head.

-OK.

[laugh] Ah!

-Wake up.

Get up.

-Ugh.

-Come on, come on.

-Ah.

-Aren't you going
to take a shower?

-Why?

-I don't believe it.

-What?

-The picnic.

-The picnic's not
until this afternoon.

-It is the afternoon.

-Oh.

OK.

Let me get this stuff down
while it's still fresh.

That was beautiful last night.

That was so amazing.

-Nelson--

-Why don't you go ahead?

I'll meet you there.

-What do you mean
you'll meet me there?

This picnic is for us?

My parents want to meet you.

-I'm coming.

Did I say I wasn't coming?

You're obsessed.

-I'm a journalist.

This is what I do for a living.

-Well it's not normal.

It's scary.

-It's research.

-It's like when you wrote
that article on the drunks.

-Alcoholics.

-You ended up
spending three months

crawling the walls
in withdrawal.

What's it going to
be next time, Nelson?

-That's a lousy attitude.

-You know, why don't
you write an article

through the eyes
of Nelson Keece?

I sure would like to read it.

-No, Jules.

-You know, the
next thing I know,

you're going to be writing
an article about suicides.

And the first I'll
hear about it is

you cruising past
the kitchen window.

-It'd be kind of hard
to finish the story.

-Yeah?

Well, just take your
computer with you

and write it on the way down.

-That's a good one.

I haven't sold anything
in eight months--

not since the piece
about alcoholics.

Eight months, honey.

I'm broke.

I need another hit.

-Who's been paying the
bills in the meantime?

-Well, you have.

I knew you'd say that.

-I'll see you later.

-Nice dress.

-I bet you'd never guess
where I've seen you before.

-So how'd you know my name?

-I've been part of your
audience this past week.

It's Maria Sanchez, right?

-Oh.

You were in court.

-Yes.

I'm just an observer-- a
frustrated lawyer, actually.

I've seen many lawyers, and
you're quite impressive.

Ah!

So much for the great weather!

Ahh!

-Ah!

-Let's duck in here.

Did they forecast
rain for today?

-I don't know.

-Sorry.

It was-- it was overly
ambitious of me.

-It's OK.

I-- I've-- I don't normally walk
into alleyways with strangers.

-Uh-huh.

Neither do I.

Neither do I.

-Um, do you live near here or?

-I saw you in the courtroom.

You dominated it.

Where do you get such power?

-Um, [uncomfortable laugh]
don't.

-Your skin is so soft.

-Don't.

-I knew it would be.

-Oh.

You're moving too fast.

Show me your power.

Where do you get such power?

-What are you talking about?

Don't.

-Show me your power, Maria.

That's what I need.

Where do you get such power?

-Oh, Jesus.

Hello, police.

I just recorded murder.

Please listen.

Ah!

-Who are you?

-Hey, hey, hey.

What's your problem, man?

-What?

-Are you all right, man?

-You OK?

-I could tell from here
that that was him again.

You know, if we don't get
a break with this guy soon,

man, the press is going to
have a field day with us.

-What do you care what
the press has to say?

-It's not that I care.

It's just my first
high profile case.

I just want it to go well,
if that's all right with you.

-Remember Jack the Ripper?

-Yeah.

-Well, I never caught him.

Let's just take a look around
and see what we can find.

-All right.

-Officer.

Officer.

-Sir will you sign this?

-Hey!

-I know you.

Where do I know you from?

-We met in a club last night.

My name is Nelson Keece.

I'm a journalist.

-A journalist.
How interesting.

What do you write about?

-Unusual situations.

-Is this unusual enough for you?

-Now.

Who the fuck are you?

MALE SPEAKER (ON TAPE):
This is what I need.

This is what I want.

Where do you get such power?

Are you following me?

-I'm doing a story
on transvestites.

I saw you in the park with
that girl, so I followed you.

-Are you a good writer?

-I won an award last year.

-You want to write about me?

I'd like that.

-You're not just saying that
to make me feel good, are you?

-No.

I'd really like that.

-I mean, you'll interview
me and everything?

-Yes.

-Good.

Good.

Then we have a deal?

-Yeah.

-Then let's seal it in blood.

-Ah.

Ooh.

MALE SPEAKER (ON TAPE):
It's what I want.

Where do you get such power?

-So.

What happened?

Where were you?

-It doesn't matter.

-It doesn't matter.

What happened to your hand?

-I don't want to
talk about it now.

-Well, do you think you could
at least to explain to me

why you didn't show
up at the picnic?

Fucking Nelson, talk to me.

Be a man.

Tell me what happened.

-I'll tell you what happened.

I saw a murder.

That's what happened.

I almost got killed and
you want to sit here

and talk about a fucking picnic.

-Juliette.

Wait.

Come here!

Come here.

Juliette, you don't understand.

Juliette-- Juliette,
where are you going?

-Beautiful girl.

Why is she leaving you?

-It's a long story.

-It's not because
of us, is it Nelson?

-Us?

No.

She doesn't know
anything about us.

-Well, that's just as well.

I'm ready.

-Ready for work?

-Our interview.

-Now?

-Yes.

I have so much to tell you.

Let's go inside.

-Does it have to be tonight?

I'm not prepared.

-We had an agreement, Nelson.

-I know we do, but I need a
little more time to prepare.

-So you would know which
questions to ask me?

-Ah.

Exactly.

-Ah, I see.

Hmm.

How about tomorrow then?

-Uh, tomorrow would be better.

-Nelson, can I hear
the tape again?

-It's upstairs and I've
just started working on it.

-I'm not being too pushy, am I?

-No.

-Tomorrow, then.

-Ahh.

FEMALE SPEAKER (ON
PHONE): 911 emergency.

-Police-- I need to
talk to someone about

the girl who was
murdered last night.

FEMALE SPEAKER (ON
PHONE): Which one?

-Which one?

The girl in the alleyway
off Market Street.

Her name was Maria.

I got it on tape.

I recorded the whole thing.

FEMALE SPEAKER (ON PHONE): Sir?

Hello?

Hello?

-Hello.

-Do you need some help, sir?

Yes, sir, I do.

I need to talk to someone
about the murder with the girl

in the alleyway
of Market Street.

-Over there.

Take a seat and
someone will see you.

-Over there?

Excuse me.
-Hey, take a seat, man.

We'll get to you in a second.

-I need to talk to someone
about the murder last night.

-Your turn is when you get
to that end of the line.

-I have it on tape.

-Great.

We'll all sit
together and watch it.

-No, no.

It's not a videotape.

This is crazy.

-Oh, no.

[laugh] What is that
on your head, bro?

-It's what they call a hat.

-Damn! [laugh]

-My favorite hat.

-I've never seen the hat before.

You look like you belong in
"The Grapes of Wrath." [laugh]

-OK, Frenchie.

Why don't you just do your work?

-I can't get to work with you
wearing that ugly ass hat.

All right.

Let's see what we got here.

Forensics, statements, evidence
found in the alleyway, a uh,

a first unit report,
station calls,

and related 911 calls, man.

There's nothing that
leaps out at you.

-Well, that's why they
call us detectives.

Did you always want
to be a cop, Laroue?

-OK.

Here we go.

Yo, you know, I'm
getting really tired

of the way you talk to me, man.

-I just asked you
a simple question.

-No, man.

It's not that you asked
me a simple question.

It's the way you asked me.

You're always talking
down to me, Haynes.

Why?

-What is it?

Some of the guys
think-- fuck it.

I think--

-OK.

I know where you're going.

Everybody thinks I'm taking
this case too personally, right?

-Something like that.

-That I shouldn't
even be on it, right?

-I'll tell you a little story.

My, uh, daughter, 10
years ago, kidnapped

and killed-- 10 years ago.

They never caught the guy.

He disappeared, got away.

You think I'm taking
it personally?

I don't think that this is
the same guy, all right?

I don't believe it.

So put your mind at ease.

I want to catch this son of
a bitch as bad as any of you

guys.

But when we get him,
I want to personally

chop his fucking head off.

OK?

-Haynes.

-Yeah.

-This 911 call came in
about 30 minutes ago.

The guy knew the victim's name.

FEMALE SPEAKER (ON
PHONE): 911 emergency.

KEECE (ON PHONE): Poliec--
I need to talk to someone

about the girl who was
murdered last night.

FEMALE SPEAKER (ON
PHONE): Which one?

KEECE (ON PHONE): Which one?

The girl in the alleyway
off Market Street.

Her name was Maria.

I got it on tape.

I recorded the whole thing.

FEMALE SPEAKER (ON PHONE): Sir?

Hello?

Hello?

-Oh, shit.
He's in the corridor.

FEMALE SPEAKER
(ON PHONE): Hello?

-You see him?

-Excuse me.

-Bro, give me back 21.

-21?

-Here.

MALE SPEAKER (ON
TAPE): So I saw you.

You had the leather
cock piece on.

MALE SPEAKER (ON TAPE):
Baby, if I wasn't taken,

I'd want all of you.

MALE SPEAKER (ON TAPE): Oh,
I am so available for you.

MALE SPEAKER (ON TAPE): Yeah?

You were--

-Take this down to the
lab with that 911 tape.

Laroue.

-Yeah.

-What did he look like?

-Kind of a early 40s, light
features, about 180 pounds.

-Before you forget, put
his face in the computer

and see if you can get a match.

-Procedure.

Yeah, I know.

-Hello?

-Nelson, it's me.

-Stefan.

-I've had an idea, Nelson.

-What's that?

-There's something
you should see?

-What's that?

-How I work.

Can you meet me at the
corner of Third and Cherokee

in 20 minutes?

-Cherokee and Third.

-Yes.

-There's a newsstand there.

I know it's short notice, but--

-Stefan.

-Yes, Nelson?

-There's something I have
to make clear to you.

-OK.

-While I'm writing
this story on you, uh--

-Just go ahead and
say it, Nelson.

-I want you to stop killing.

-Ahh.

This is not about killing.

This is about the pursuit.

-So we understand each other?

-Absolutely.

-I'll be there.

FEMALE SPEAKER (ON
PHONE): Police department.

May I help you?

Hello?

[phone ringing]

JULIETTE (ON RECORDING): Hi.

Leave a message for
Nelson or Juliette.

JULETTE (ON PHONE): Hey, Nelson.

It's me.

Do you think you could set aside
your work for maybe an hour

and come and meet me
at the lounge tonight?

Uh, I really think
we should talk.

OK.

Bye.

-Excuse me.

Have you seen a young
lady come in here

with the curly brown hair?

-Um, I think she
went down that aisle.

-Have you read the
Oxford New Press version?

-Uh, no.

I haven't.

-It's Lori, isn't it?

-How do you know my name?

-Your name tag.

-Yeah.

I'm not wearing it.

-You work at the
newsstand, right?

-I don't remember you.

Should I?

-Well, that's just great.

I buy my newspaper
there every day.

Obviously I didn't make such
a good impression, then.

-I'm sorry.

I see a lot of people, you know?

-You have beautiful hair.

-Hey.

I don't like being touched, OK?

-I'm sorry.
Actually just waiting--

-Excuse me.

---for a friend.

-Hey!

Hey, oww.

-Sometimes I'm a little
impulsive for my own good.

-Oh my god.

-Look who's here.

-I'll have a double
whiskey, please.

-He looks terrible.

-So when did you
start drinking again?

-Just now.

-Uh, Nelson, we need to talk.

-One more, please.

-Nelson, please don't.

If you're just going to get
smashed, I'm going to leave.

Why did you want to see me?

-Well, I don't want
to drag this out,

but I really think we
need some time apart.

-Yeah.

There's something
I have to tell you.

-What?

-You look beautiful tonight.

-Oh, Nelson.

-I'm drowning.

That's what.

I'm drowning.

I can't tell when
you're serious anymore.

Well, I'm serious
when I say I love you.

-You know, Nelson, you can't
possibly know what love is.

-Hey.

What you doing?

-Oh, just playing around.

Working on something.

-Yeah?

Hey.

You [inaudible]?

-No.

Uh, he's Ivan.

-There you go, boy.

-What we got going?

That was him, yeah?

-Alleyway killer.

-Hold on, now.

If he's the killer, why would
he come to a police precinct?

And then why does
he have it on tape?

-I don't know.

A lot of unanswered questions.

-I'll tell you one thing.

I've seen this guy
somewhere before.

-Yeah?

-Yeah.

I can't remember
where, but I know

I've seen him somewhere--
sometime before the alley.

-Hmm.

Well, I'm going to
take this to the press.

They'll have his face on
the front page by morning.

-Oh no you're not.

If you do that, he's
going to go underground.

-What are you
talking about, man?

Somebody out there
has seen this guy.

We could save a life.

-Yeah.

We could lose one, too.

-How?

-That's what happened
to my daughter's killer.

He saw his fucking face in
the paper and he disappeared.

I'm not going to let
that happen again.

You understand?

-Yeah, man.

But this is not your
daughter's killer, all right?

You said so yourself.

Now you've got to
let this go, Haynes.

We've got to get this out there.

-All right, man.

If we're going to play God, I'll
give you one more dead lady.

And then that
picture goes public.

It has to.

-If there's going to be any
more victims, let it be me.

-Boo.

-God.

How did you get in here?

-Where there's a
will there's a way.

Nelson, I came to apologize.

-For what?

-We had an agreement and
I betrayed your trust.

It was for you, Nelson--
I mean the story.

-I understand.

-Thank you.

-I'm ready.

You can ask me anything.

-I'm going to record this.

-Do you like being a
journalist, Nelson?

-Yeah, I do.

-You're a people
person, aren't you?

-I am, too.

I think that's why
we get along so well.

-Talk.

-Well, aren't you going
to ask me any questions?

-Tell me about the first one.

-I was 17.

-And how old was she?

-35.

And how did it happen?

-We were making love.

She found me amusing.

-And you didn't like that?

-No.

I didn't like that.

-But you enjoyed killing her.

-There's a moment when
you look into her eyes

and the last bit of
breath leaves her body.

-How does that make you feel?

-Like a god.

Like a god.

-And that feeling makes
you want to kill again.

-Well, there's no rush.

The hunt is as
important as the kill.

-What do you feel
when it's all over?

-Euphoria.

-Do you feel depressed?

-No.

-Do you ever feel any shame?

-No.

Never.

-Do you have any
feelings for the victims?

-Love.

I loved every one of them.

-Ah.

How many women have you killed?

-How many women have
you make love to?

-Jesus.

Jesus.

-Why are you judging me?

-I'm not.

-Did you judge those other
people you wrote about?

-No.

-Then why are you judging me?

-I'm trying to understand you.

-What you understand
is only what you see.

You look down on me,
and you see a fool.

You look up at me,
and you see a god.

Look straight into my eyes
and you will see yourself.

Put your shoes on.

-OK.

-Let's go, Nelson.

Let's go.

What's taking so long?

-Where are we going?

-There's someone I'd like you
to meet-- an old friend of mine.

-Why?

-Perhaps this person
will enlighten you

and you'll understand
where this is all going.

-Yeah.

Where what is all going?

-The story, Nelson.

The story.

-Knock on the door.

Go ahead.

-Stefan, darling, you're early.

Come on in.

How about your friend?

Have we met?

-No.

-You look familiar.

What's your name?

-Nelson.

-Meet Eric.

-Eric.

Nice to meet you.

-Nelson.

What a cute name.

Why don't you sit down and
make yourself comfortable.

Would you like a drink,
Nelson, or don't you drink?

-Yes.

Yes, I don't drink.

And no, uh, I
don't need a drink.

-Well, if you don't mind,
I'm going to have one.

Did you see that?

Isn't this the girl
I saw you with?

-Yes.

Poor girl.

-Stefan, tell me you had
nothing to do with it.

-Eric.

-Whew.

I feel better.

Well, I suppose you don't
talk much either, do you?

Is this the one that
you told me about?

-Told him what?

-What'd he tell you about me?

-Nothing.

-I think I know what
this little party needs.

I'll just be a minute.

-Isn't this cozy?

This is a new
experience for me too.

-OK.

-Ahh.

[laugh] [claps]
Nelson, meet Erica.

-Now, isn't this better?

-Hello, Erica.

-Ah, you have to
forgive him, Erica.

Nelson here is
somewhat of a novice.

-Oh.

Oh, come on.

Loosen up.

Look.

Why don't you just
sit and watch and then

join in when you feel like it?

Would that be OK, Stefan?

-Absolutely.

Isn't she special?

What she lacks in quality she
makes up for in convenience.

-What does he mean?

-You said you didn't do men.

-But take a look, Nelson.

Does this look
like a man to you?

-[inaudible].

Get out of here.

-What are you going to do?

-I said get out of here.

-Ah.

-No!

-Ah!

-Don't you move.

Don't you move.

Shut your mouth, bitch.

Don't you move.

-OK.

-Let's do this.

You want to write a story?

Look here!

-Ah!

-No.

No.

-Give me your hand
and let's do this.

-No.

-Let's do this together.

Don't you let me down.

Come on.

Give me you hand.

-No!

-One, two--

-Stop it.

-[cackles]

[groans]

[groans]

-A small cassette, a collection
of gay conversations.

They're all in the same club,
no clue as to which club.

Got a partial print,
but not enough

for the computer
to find a match.

Any luck on that picture yet?

-Nope.

-That's good.

Oh.

There's, uh-- there's one
knife homicide tonight.

A transvestite.

The knife work was sloppy.

Forensics think there
were two people involved

on account of the
fact that there

was a little fight
after the killing.

-[laugh]

-One left through the
window, the other just

walked right out the front door.

-Ahh.

-We gotta get that
picture out, Haynes.

-Is God going back on his word?

Don't I have one dead lady left?

-No, man.

I can't do it.

The next thing it's going to be
us on the front fucking page.

-OK.

-Are you listening, man?

-Uh huh.

MALE SPEAKER: Officer.

-Yeah.

Now I know where I saw him
before-- in a magazine article

about a year ago.

That guy got busted for
being drunk and disorderly,

a couple of times.

About a week later, he
wrote an article about it.

He was pretty hard
on the department.

He said that we were,
uh, cruel and insensitive

to a medical condition.

He wanted to, uh, know what
it was like to be a drunk,

so he became one.

That's the guy I
saw in the alleyway.

He had a small tape
recorder with him.

-So what he'd do now?

-Nothing.

-Haynes.

-We just want to talk to
him for a little while.

-Yeah.

I bet he did something
weird, right?

-What are you doing, man?

We don't have a warrant.

Anything we turn over is
going to be inadmissible.

-What makes you say that?

-Well, I saw him
the other night.

He was wearing a dress.

-A dress? [laugh]

-Yeah.
I swear.

A black one.

With the long sleeves,
lace, and sequins.

It was very nice.

-Really?

-I guess it's better than
coming home drunk every night.

Right?
-Yeah.

-Yeah.

I put a stop to that.

He used to come home at 3:00
AM in the morning singing

at the top of his lungs and
peeing all over the stairs.

Can you imagine?

-I'd rather not.

-Yeah.

Oh.

Oh.

Here it is.

-You got it?

Terrific.

-You just making up
your own rules now?

That's how we doing this?

-Go back to the car
and get a donut.

-Fuck you, man.

-He's new.

-Ahh.

-Scoot over to the precinct.

About an hour.

All right.

Check this out.

You know that transvestite
that got knifed last night?

Forensics only found
one set of prints

on a broken bottle--
Nelson Keece.

-No kidding.

-Yeah.

What now, Snoop Doggy Dog?

-That guy starts writing
about alcoholics,

and then he becomes one.

He starts writing
about transvestites,

he puts on a dress.

Now he's written
about serial killers.

-Yeah?

-Look.

I got the girlfriend's,
uh, phone number.

Let's call her up, find
out where she's at,

and get our
surveillance team on it.

You know, I need a dictaphone.

-Dictaphone?

-Yeah.

-Oh.

-You got them donuts?

-Yeah.

-I hope you like jelly.

-I hate jelly.

-Yeah, but eat it anyway.

-Hey.
-Hi.

How's it going?

-Ah, good.

I'm hungry.

I'd like a hot dog.

-OK.

Everything?

-That'd be great.

All right.

-Here you go.

-Thanks.

-Oh.

Napkin.

Perfect.

Thanks.

-Bye.

-Whoa.

-Oh, I-- oh, I'm so sorry.

-It was my fault.

-Oh, I'm embarrassed.

-Let me get you another hot dog.

-No.

No.

That's not necessary.

-I insist.

-Extra ketchup and
mustard, right?

Judging from my jacket,
that's how you like it.

Here you go.

-Thanks.

-Thank you.

-You've got everything?

-Well, I have to go.

-All right.

Be careful.

-Mr. Keece, are you there?

It's me, Mrs. Morris.

-Mrs. Morris.

-Oh, hello.

-Hi.

Have you seen anyone
in my apartment?

-The police.

-Oh, great.

-What have you done, Mr. Keece?

-I haven't done anything.

-Well, you must
have done something

because everybody's
looking for you.

-Well, that proves it, then.

-Well, why don't you
just tell them the truth?

-I don't think it would make
a difference at this point.

-Honesty is the best policy.

-I appreciate that.

Juliette?

I don't know where to begin.

What I do know is
that I love you

more than anything
on this earth.

I know I've let you down.

I know I've hurt you.

I know I've been a failure.

One thing is had I
gone to the picnic,

this wouldn't have happened.

I'm sorry for all this.

I'm going to find him.

I have to do one right thing
before this is all over.

I'm sending you this tape in
case I never see you again.

I know now I should have written
a story called "The World

Through the Eyes of Juliette."

It's a beautiful world,
which one dark cloud over it.

OK.

JULIETTE (ON RECORDING): Hi.

Leave a message for
Nelson or Juliette.

-Nelson, it's me.

It's me.

Pick up the phone.

It's very much in your
interest to talk to me.

-Stefan.

I'm glad you called.

-How are you?

-I'm fine.

How do you feel?

-Disappointed.

-You weren't supposed
to kill anyone.

You should have
been square with me.

I might have surprised you.

-Still.

You did change the plan, Nelson.

I wasn't the one who brought
along that nasty old gun.

-I'm just learning how to do
this, and I want to play again.

Cut me some slack, Stefan.

Stefan!

-I'm here.

-Where are you?

-Close to your heart.

-Why don't you come up
and talk to me about it?

-Oh, come on, Nelson.

The cops are looking
for you, not me.

Besides, .

Last night marked the
end of our relationship.

We now have a beginning
and a middle to your story.

All you need is the end.

-We've never finished
the interview.

-That's because you're
a failure, Nelson.

You lack the courage of your
own convictions, unlike me.

I'm a finisher.

-There's still something missing
from the beginning, Stefan.

That woman who laughed at you,
the first woman you killed?

She found you amusing.

Please tell me why
she found you amusing.

-This interview is over.

-So how does the story end?

-Like it always
does-- with a murder.

Have you another
victim in mind yet?

-Listen to the tape again--
the one in your machine.

In the end, the voice
is all you'll have left.

JULIETTE (ON RECORDING): Hi.

Leave a message for
Nelson or Juliette.

-Oh, god.

Juliette.

Come on.

God.

-You got one, huh?

-That's right.

You know how hard it is to
find one of those things?

-Where's the batteries?

-I don't know.

-It says right on the box,
"batteries not included."

-Oh.

My bad.

You want me to go
get some batteries?

-Why don't you take
a look around back?

I'll keep an eye
on the warehouse.

-All right.

Cool.

-Now there's a nice lady.

Oh, shit.

That's not a lady.

That was Keece.

-[whistles] Cab!

Cab!

Taxi!

KEECE (ON TAPE): How many
women have you killed?

STEFAN (ON TAPE): How many
women have you made love to?

-Haynes.

Haynes, talk to me.

You there?

Hey.

I know you're not asleep.

Ah!

Uh, hey.

This is Laroue.

Haynes is dead.

Uh, I need immediate backup
over at 111 Mission Street.

Repeat-- officer down.

Send me some backup.

-Hi.

I'm sorry.

I didn't mean to startle you.

You remember me?

You dropped these at
the hot dogs stand.

-Thank you.

How did you know I was here?

-Well, that's the bizarre part.

I live right down
the street and I

saw you come in
here a while ago.

-Oh.

That's lucky for me.

-No.

The luck was all mine.

-Thank you.

-My name is Stefan.

This is great.

I've never seen anything
like this before.

-You know what?

Actually, I was just
getting ready to leave.

Oh, were you?

-Excuse me.

-Excuse me.

-Costumatic.

-Juliette.

-Nelson?

-Are you alone?

-What?

-Listen to me.

Are you alone?

Nelson, please.

Not now.

-The killer is coming for you.

-What?

Who?

-The killer is coming.

Stefan.
He's coming for you.

Please, honey.

Believe me this time.

-Oh.

Oh, I see.

-Is he there?

-Uh, mhm.

-Get out of there.

I'm on my way.

-OK.

What do you want?

-Nelso didn't tell you?

We're writing a book together.

-Really?

What's it about?

-The pursuit of happiness.

-Ah!

-Oh.

Ahh.

Ahh!

-Juliette.

Oh, Juliette.

Romeo's here.

Come out.

Come on, Juliette.

This is the end of the story.

We can't let Nelson down.

Is that you, Juliette?

Where are you?

Juliette!

-Ah!

-There you are.

[laugh]

-Ah!

-Pick up the knife.

Come on.

Pick up the knife!

Come on.

-Ah.

-I did it for you.

Now you know how it feels.

-Freeze.

Freeze.

-Nelson!

No!

No!

What have you done?

-Police.

Lady, get back.
-No.

It's the wrong guy.

-Lady, stay away from him.

Oh, god.

-Don't move.

-Oh, god.

Nelson--

-Do not move.

Keep your hands
where I can see them.

-Juliette.

Julie, are you OK?

It's OK.

It's OK.

-Excuse me, Mr. Keece.

Will you sign one more?

-Sure.

Here you go.

-Thank you very much, sir.

MALE SPEAKER: The
killer is coming.

The killer is coming.

The killer is coming for you.